Canada
Why i picked Canada , is because it is the largest liable countries
- It has boats and 3 city's one tree all and tr onto and vain cover
- There is a Titanic and wild life tours and flew and the horseshoes fall enoremous water full
- canada is country with many blessings
Aloha Kahealani,
ReplyDeletemy name is Cia. I am a Summer Learning Journey blogger who will be working with you over the summer break.
I like that you have included Horseshoe Falls in your information about Canada, as well the province Ontario, and two of their most populated cities; Montreal and Vancouver.
A suggestion for next time, remember to be mindful that when you are stating facts to add a little more detail to them to ensure they make sense and the readers can understand them really well. For example I would really like to know what you meant when you said Canada is blessed, if you could share some information to explain that would be great!
It can be hard to organise your thoughts when you’re writing especially when you’re researching new places and there is a lot of information. I have had that problem myself, just be sure to pick facts that stand out to you and add details to make it interesting to read. What other details about Horseshoe Falls could you include? (Think about how big it is, where it is and how close you could get to it).
Well done for making a start to the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts over the summer.
Toe feiloa’i fo’i ('See you again' in Samoan),
Cia.